Great points! I think I may have started reading a few of these…and then stopped. 🙂
With a nod to the Onion…
I’m trying not to fly off the handle, but please indulge me, at least at first, in a bit of tough love.
If your current work in progress contains a scene, or worse, a sequence of scenes, in which the young protagonist spends his or her days at sword training or magic training or frickin’ social studies you must immediately highlight all of that text and delete it now, before it does you any actual harm.
And it will do you harm.
By now I hope you know that I’m not big on hard rules—you have to do this, you can never do that—but the obligatory fight training has, for me at least, gone from cliché to actual annoyance. And it’s in at least half the books I read—maybe two thirds.
As far as I can tell, here’s why those scenes are there…
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